Pon's Journey: Chapter 10

So as those of you who know me, know that i write from time to time. i have decided to put my book up bit by bit on DA. Mostly to back it up and try and get some feedback to see whether or not it is a big steaming pile of poo or not. Once the book is done i will remove all of it from DA.


So if you could take the time to read these and tell me what you do or do not like about it that would be great.

Also a quick thank you to those who have been giving great feedback. I look forward to hearing more from you all.

Below are links to the submitted chapters

Pon's Journey:
Pon's Journey: Intro and Chapter 1
Chapter 2 and 3 Updated
Pon's Journey: Chap 4 and 5
Pon's Journey: Chap 6
Pon's Journey:Chapter 7
Pon's Journey: Chap 8
Pon's Journey: Chapter 9
Pon's Journey: Chapter 10
Pon's Journey: Chapter 11
Pon's Journey: Chapter 12
Pon's Journey: Chap 13
Pon's Journey: Chap 14
Pon's Journey:Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Pon's Journey: Chapter 19
Pon's Journey: Chapter 20
Pon's Journey: Chapter 21
Chapter 22

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